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д , Make your writing clear ʿѧ༭ISE༭Lisa ClancyʿһѧϰƼдɡ

1. Make your writing clear

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T he observed changes in the gut microbiota caused inflammation in the mice.

仰۵ֱӵϵһ۲оֽͬʱ֣ûֱӵϵĻ仰Ӧǣ

The observed changes in the gut microbiota were associated with inflammation in the mice.

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ָʵĴit, which, this, thattheyָӦöס

Streptavidin binds biotin, which enables detection.

仰 which ָ: streptavidin, biotin the binding of streptavidin to biotin.

Ϊ˳壬仰ԸдΪ

Streptavidin binds biotin, and this binding enables detection.

ֱӵظΪ

Binding of streptavidin to biotin enables detection.

2. Make your writing specific

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The treatment improved serum LDL levels. Ѫ LDL ˮƽ

ָζӻǼٻ仰 The treatment decreased serum LDL levels. Ѫ LDL ˮƽ

ʱģ

Nearly half a dozen studies have been performed.

仰Ը壬Ըijɣ Five studies have been performed.

ܶģ, Lung cancer is highly deadly.

Ըij

Lung cancer is the primary cause of cancer death worldwide, accounting for 1.8 million deaths in 2018.

3. Use simple language

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д߳ľӣֱӵر˼

, Our results showed that the compound had a significant promotion effect towards cell proliferation.

Ըij

The compound significantly promoted cell proliferation.

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Due to the fact that we observed an obvious association between the agonism of PKC signaling and decreased glucose levels, it is tempting to speculate that PKC signaling may play a modulatory role in regulating gluconeogenesis.

Ըij

Because PKC signaling agonism decreased glucose levels, PKC signaling might potentially modulate gluconeogenesis.

ͬϢӦڵľظ

, We observed that the levels of complex formation increased as the temperature increased. Therefore, complex formation is directly related to temperature.

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4. Use sentence structure to guide readers

ھӵĿͷΪʵ

ľӽṹ߲ӵ⡣, The treatment decreased symptoms. 仰ߵӡǿtreatmentġ

֮, The symptoms were decreased by the treatment.

仰ߵӡǿsymptomsġ

ھӵĿͷѾܹĸھӵĩβϢ

ľӽṹͨгֵϢߡھӿͷѾᵽĶ԰Ӻ֮ǰľ֮ĹϵϢھβ(ʱҲΪλá)ǿϢ

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Promising results in cancer treatment have been achieved through immunotherapy. Patients often do not respond to immunotherapy, and therefore it is not used as a first-line treatment.

һûȷ˵ƷimmunotherapyΪƷֱĩŽܡڶ仰Ŀͷ˲ȱӦPatients often do not respond to immunotherapyƺһϣĽìܡˣ߿ܻᷢϢ⡣

ͬϢԸرΪ

Immunotherapy has shown promising results in cancer treatment. However, immunotherapy is not used as a first-line treatment because patients often do not respond to it.

һ仰ȷƷڶáhoweverʾߵĶԱȣһᵽƷȻṩ˹ЧϢ¶Զ˵⡣

5. Phrase comparisons clearly

ڱȽϵһЩ

ʹñȽϴ(-erβĴʣmoreless)һҪȷȽϵʲô

Lung cancer has a higher mortality rate.

仰ͽIJΪhigherʾȽϣǾû˵ȽϡӦдԳȽϵĶ

Lung cancer has a higher mortality rate than pancreatic cancer.

߱Ƚϼ(higher)Իһ˵

Lung cancer has a high mortality rate.

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Increase decreaseӦڱȽͬһʱ仯ֵڱȽϲֵͬ죬

The babys height was decreased compared with the mans height.

õúܱ׾ܻذʾӤһʼͬȻӤ߾½ˡʵϣ˼:

The babys height was less than the mans height.

ߣǸֱӵĻ

The baby was shorter than the man.

ͬԭҲڿѧʵͬȺ塣

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The androgen levels were decreased in the female group compared with the male group.

ӦøΪ The androgen levels were lower in the female group than the male group.

ǣһбȽʱʹádecreased

磬 The androgen levels decreased with age in the female group.

ʱ䡢ٷֱȱ仯

ʱ䡢ٷֱ仯Ӧ

˵һֵΪijֵ˵ֵijֵDzͬġֵ,Ӧʹto仯̶ȣӦʹby

磬ֵ100ӵ300ʹ:

The value increased to three times the initial amount.

[ע: threefold 300% ɴthree times]

The value increased by two times.

[ע: twofold 200% two times.]

ҲпܲΪһ/1/100%ļٽʹˮƽΪ㡣

The insulin levels in the knockout mice were tenfold (or ten times) lower than the levels in the wild-type mice. (óСȵˮƽҰС10(10))

û塣Իһ˵

The insulin levels in the knockout mice were 10% those in the wild-type mice. ( óС ˮƽҰС10%)

The insulin levels in the knockout mice were 90% lower than those in the wild-type mice.óСȵˮƽҰС90%

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